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An Interview with a Night Lord

(A little character building exercise I worked on as I seek to turn Cerck the Night Lord into a worthy antagonist for a novel or series of short stories.  This here is a straight quote, which is a little different to anything I have done before.)

 

“Ah yes, ‘honour’.  You thin-bloods rant on and on about your honour as though you invented the concept; as though none of us knew what the word meant as we slaved away creating this crumbling Imperium you serve.  But, tell me this, Brother Kruss of the Executioners Chapter of the Corpse-Emperor’s Adeptus Astartes: Have you not done distasteful things for the sake of your honour?  Have you not attacked those you thought innocent, killed those you thought did not deserve to die, simply because honour dictated you obey your orders?

Tell me, O Honourable One, did you not betray the very Imperium who names me heretic and traitor, all to honour an oath sworn to the Astral Claws by your ancestors?

What makes you so different to me, then?  Was it enthusiasm, perhaps?  Did you have to be dragged, kicking and screaming like a child, into doing that which your honour demanded?

I gladly betrayed the Imperium, as did the rest of my Legion and my Father, Konrad Curze himself. The Imperium was built upon the corpses of the Legions – our corpses – brave warriors fighting and dying for the lies of a man who would be a God.

I gladly betrayed a Grandfather who used us, who encouraged us to be the monsters he created and then discarding us as unclean when we were of no further use.

I was a murderer, you know, back on Nostramo.  I slit more throats before my tenth birthday than you have in whatever infinitesimal  period of time you have served your upstart Chapter.  I was a murderer, a rapist, a vicious, violent criminal, and yet I could not in good conscience stand by while the Emperor condemned the Night Lords for being what his Imperium needed us to be.  How could I, a noble warrior of the Legiones Astartes, swallow my pride – my honour – while my father and my brothers were so mistreated, ordered to be destroyed by the Emperor who created us?

Kill me if you must, for I have lived and fought and killed for ten thousand years; I have murdered whole worlds and I have eaten the geneseed of loyalist and traitor both.  Death holds no fear for one such as I.

You may claim my head and have vengeance on behalf of the mouldering corpse you so fervently serve,  but remember this, O Mighty Executioner: The only difference between you and I is that, when the stakes got too high, your Chapter crawled meekly back to the bosom of the Emperor you once betrayed.

We, at least, have the honour to stand by our convictions.”

-     Lonalios Cerck (aka ‘the Faceless’), Champion of the Night Lords Traitor Legion, during his interrogation by the Executioners Chapter of the Adeptus Astartes.

 

 

 

Birth Pangs

There is a scream.

It is does not belong to a human, this scream.

It does not issue forth from a living throat; no, it is a sound far more base than that.

This scream is a primordial wail of the earth, of existence itself being torn asunder.

It is the death-rattle of safety; the whispered epitaph of hearth and home.

The wail of the banshee afore the whimper of the grave.

Eyes snap open, unfocussed.

Birth pangs.  Shattering.  Crying.  Thrust forward, the last restraint proving to be no restraint at all.

Vision swirls.  Do you spin, or does the world spin around you?

Sightless eyes see too much.  Were those faces, obscured in a cloud of snow so fast – so fast – they never existed?

Push.

Push.

Pushed?  It matters not in the end, the result is the same. The cocoon is breached. The last illusion bursts in an arterial spray of tinkling glass.

Cold air against feverish-hot skin.  No more safety.

It is almost refreshing in its own way, blinding daylight glistening off the approaching abyss; comforting, almost.

There is a scream.  There are several more.  They are human, this time.

Clarity; clarity in that last descent.

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“Jesus,” he mutters, watching as they pour from the surrounding buildings, their oohs and ahs of feigned sympathy small payment to witness a macabre spectacle such as this.

“Poor bastards,” he says aloud, the words as meaningless as the event itself.  A nearby old woman, her wizened, bitter-lemon face twisting into what she no-doubt thinks is a conciliatory expression, grunts at him.

He hesitates a moment, wondering what is appropriate.  What should he say? What does the old hag think is appropriate?  Should he offer to help?

He hunches, withdrawing.  Hands in his pockets, he turns and lurches away, unable to admit even within the caverns of his own tiny mind that his inner conflict is meaningless.

All he wants is to do nothing at all.

The Price of Purity

(a fun little piece I worked on briefly to help me establish a character I might use as an antagonist in a Black Library 40K pitch down the line.)

The Price of Purity

by Tim Sweeney

“I told you this would happen,” whispered Cerck as he drove his fingers through the Iron Warrior’s eyes.

He was very careful not to push too deeply, not wanting the energised talons on his fingertips to penetrate the brain and kill the enemy warrior outright. Oh no, they must pierce the eye lenses just so, and rest against the eyeballs, razored claws ever-so-gently slicing through the pupil. Vision would begin peeling away in black curtains for the instant before the gelatinous masses burst, hissing and popping in the sparking lighting field that encased the Night Lord’s gauntlets.

The Iron Warrior refused to surrender meekly, levelling a heavy punch into Cerck’s stomach even as he began to bellow in agony. Cerck took the blow easily, not bothering to dodge, his ancient armour more than a match for even the mightiest of blows.

“Now, now, a Legionary should never cry,” he laughed as the Iron Warrior’s screams intensified. Cerck took another punch to the chest, weaker this time, more frantic, ignoring it as he jabbed his thumb-talon through the mouth grill of the Iron Warrior’s helm. There was no finesse this time, just a rapid gouge that sliced the tongue down the middle. He gave a little shudder as he felt the gushing blood lap against his hand, bubbling around his claws.
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Tales from the Great Crusade: A Thorn Among Roses

It’s been a while between updates, so apologies for that.  Still trying to find the time to work on the holiday photos (they need a fair bit of cleaning up in Photoshop unfortunately, damn underwater being so blue!), but in the meantime I figured I would post the link to my story A Thorn Among Roses, my entry in the Tales from the Great Crusade 1000-word short story contest judged by Aaron Dembski-Bowden.

Unfortunately, I came up short in the contest, but I’m still ultra proud of the story itself.  I feel it was an important stepping-stone to get into a professional mindset when it comes to writing.  I’m including the link to the forum thread the story was posted in rather than reposting it myself, as I am still hopeful it will wind up in the Great Crusade’s published anthology.  If you follow the link it’s the second story down.

Feel free to drop me some feedback as always, it is very much appreciated.

 

Cheers,

Tim

To Tread Upon the Path of God

(This piece is an experimental, stream of consciousness kind-of-horror-kind-of-not story.  It was sort of written with 40k in mind, but is not all that specific to the setting)
I walked.

The road stretched out before me, endless black bitumen steaming under a baleful, crimson sun.  I looked straight ahead, eyes never wavering.  There was nothing to see in any case, the brownish sands of the desert as lifeless and barren as the path I strode upon.

I walked.

The pain struck me then, as it always did.  It was the cold first, a million microscopic shards of ice driving through my skin, through my muscles, my bones.  Every nerve fired simultaneously, exquisite agony turning to immeasurable pleasure,  embracing me like an old friend.   I smiled as the pinpricks of blood appeared.  The aching, overwhelming agony was almost refreshing in the heat of that never ending day.

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Tales from the Great Crusade

Been a while, busy with work and the novel unfortunately, so not much time for ‘fun’ writing.

Anyhoo, the writing competition I entered into a few months back (Tales from the Great Crusade) is drawing to a close, with my story due to be publicly posted in the next couple of days.  The stories themselves are being judged by Black Library author and cat hater, Aaron Dembski-Bowden, which is an absolutely HUGE honour for everyone involved.

If anyone is interested, keep an eye on that thread at the Great Crusade forums (great place, incidentally, if you are interested at all in Warhammer 40k) and wish me luck, as the winners are getting published and that would be a huge boon in my quest to become a sci-fi rock star!

Tim

The Fabulous One: A Tale of Bile [Part 3]

The Fabulous One

A Tale of Bile – Part the Third and Last

by Tim Sweeney

 

“Ah yes, my dear old brother,” continued Fabius Bile, inexplicably feeling as though weeks had gone by since he had last spoken to Gharghath the Unspleened.

“INNNNNTTTTTTRLLLLOOOOOD?!” inquired Gharghath, apparently unsure why Bile was forgoing his usual habit of leading into the story with some form of humorous aside.

Bile ignored the Berzerker bound to his operating altar, staring off into space in what he hoped was a suitably dramatic fashion.

“Him and I were just so very different.  Sure, we looked like siblings, what with the chiselled good looks and long, white hair that just can’t be tamed, and we even share a penchant for human-skin trench coats,”

“SEEEEEEEEEEMMMMMILLLLARRRSH!!!” said Gharghath, somewhat smugly in Bile’s opinion. Read the rest of this entry

The Fabulous One: A Tale of Bile (Part 2)

The Fabulous One

A Tale of Bile – Part the Second

by Tim Sweeney


“Look Ma, no hands!” cried Fabius Bile, the multiple arms of his chirurgeon armature stabbing down into the chest of Gharghath the Unspleened.

Ma’nkkqopxrqak’takzzxxpkq the Unpronounceable, Daemonette of Slaanesh and part-time nurse in Bile’s ‘practice’, rolled her eyes.  Gharghath contented himself with rabid screams of two-parts agony, one-part mirth.

“No sense of humour, our Ma,” whispered Bile conspiratorially to the strapped down berzerker, “which is kind of ironic when you stop and think about her God.  I mean really, you must enjoy a good laugh if you design your seductive sex daemon to look like the love-child of a Dark Eldar Haemonculus and a lobster, am I right?”

“URRRRGHAHAHAHA!” Gharghath, obviously no fan of the rival God/Goddess/Thing, laughed in hearty agreement.  Ma the Daemonette just hissed.

Wiping the Khorne worshipper’s sputum from his face, Bile removed the various syringes and cutting implements from his guest’s torso.

“See how we have fun?  Anyway, where was I?” Read the rest of this entry

The Fabulous One – A Tale of Bile (Part 1)

(A little 40k themed comedy spoof story about everyone’s favourite renegade Apothecary, I whipped this up pretty much as an escape from the darkness of the short stories I’d been writing.  As usual, Warhammer 40,000, Fabius Bile, Space Marines, etc, etc all belong to Games Workshop)

The Fabulous One

A Tale of Bile – Part the First

by Tim Sweeney


“Tell me, friend Garghath,” said Fabius Bile, “can one assume that you know something of the original Legions?”

“GNARGLEBARGLEFEARTHHHNNNNNNNNNGGGGHHHH!!!!” said Gharghath the Unspleened, Lord of the renegade Scalpchewers and Champion of Khorne.

Bile shook his head sadly at his guest’s lack of tact, pausing for a moment to take a deep draught from the syringe so recently removed from the Khornate champion’s nether regions.

“Mmmmmm, exquisite.  Musky, hint of corruption, small touch of cinnamon; twenty-first founding I believe?”

Gharghath managed a rather frothy nod, obviously feeling less murderous now that the giant needle had been pulled free of his tender parts; his lunges against the daemonic restraints were almost placid now in comparison. Read the rest of this entry

Pride Goeth

Foreword: This story is my attempt at writing something less character driven, instead focusing on a series of rapid viewpoint shifts while still hopefully establishing some hooks in each scene. I took some inspiration from Necropolis by Dan Abnett with what I wanted to accomplish with this one. It is also my first attempt at showing some non-human viewpoints. This has only seen me do a quick twice-over edit so far, so any help, comments, or criticisms will be very much appreciated.
This is another 40k story – Warhammer 40,000, Orks, Space Marines, etc, are all the property of Games Workshop, etc.

Pride Goeth

by Tim Sweeney

“This is my world Captain, not yours,”

The Governor leaned back in his chair, feet placed on the colossal beatiwood desk in a gesture of nonchalance rarely shown in the presence of a warrior-lord of the Adeptus Astartes.

The Captain simply snarled at him, not bothering to speak.

“The mistake you made was hubris,” the Governor withdrew a cigar from the Aquila-stamped case on the desk, voice echoing strangely from his augmetic jaw and throat, “You should have stayed in the void and commanded the fleet,”

He drew the pungent smoke deep into his lungs, the cigar mashed awkwardly between his flesh and iron lips.

“Instead, you decided to play politics on my planet,” the Governor laughed; it came out as a series of harsh buzzes and clicks, “Well, you can see where that got you.”

Bzzt-click.  Bzzt-click.  Bzzt-click.

Captain Kirov of the Hearteaters Chapter of Space Marines, resplendent in iron and ochre artificer armour, stared across the desk, desperate to lash out.

Unfortunately for him, his arms and legs had been removed hours ago, literally torn from their sockets.

Kirov sat there, little more than shredded armour and mangled torso, Astartes blood leaking slowly from wounds that would have killed a normal man thrice over.

Utterly helpless.

Bzzt-click.  Bzzt-click.  Bzzt-click.

The Governor continued to laugh. Read the rest of this entry

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