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Honour Paid – A Rejected Black Library Submission

(One of two short stories I submitted to the Black Library last year (the other is being repurposed).  I really like this story, and am very proud of it.  I hope to have the opportunity to write about the Executioners for BL one day)

 

Honour Paid

By Tim Sweeney

They drifted silently toward the end of the world.

Matte black, invisible against the void, the unpowered Thunderhawk Grind-Two-Eight rotated gently along its axis, almost imperceptibly, one downturned wing lifting to allow the passage of a piece of hurtling debris.

Staring at the external sensor display, Veteran-Sergeant Fenan Husq of the Executioners grunted as he saw the twin-headed eagle of the Imperium etched into the detritus flash past, a mere whisper from ripping a hole in the side of the gunship. Read the rest of this entry

Heresy Ad Infinitum – Part IV

Heresy Ad Infinitum – Part IV

By Tim Sweeney

IV

-againandagainandagainandagainand-

He awoke in the void.  Eyes wide. Veins bulging. Lips drawn back over gritted teeth.

It all came flooding back.  The becalmed courier vessel.  The weeks spent living with brothers from different Legions.

Betrayal. Bloodshed. Death.

And it was all a lie. Read the rest of this entry

Heresy Ad Infinitum – Part III

Heresy Ad Infinitum – Part III

By Tim Sweeney

III

Virhaddon threw himself backwards, crashing to deck while bringing the pistol up to fire between the knees of his armour.

He watched as the Night Lord seemed to flow to the side, impossibly fast even for a Space Marine, each of Usker’s perfectly aimed shots somehow missing by a hairsbreadth. The Iron Hand did not have another chance to fire as Cerck launched himself through the air to tackle the Loyalist to the deck. Read the rest of this entry

Heresy Ad Infinitum – Part II

Heresy Ad Infinitum – Part II

By Tim Sweeney

II

‘By the grace of the Phoenician, enough Cerck!’

The Night Lord paid Holcius no mind, kicking an iron shelving unit laden with ammunition, causing it to tumble over as though it weighed nothing. The frame crashed to the deck, accompanied by crunch of flakboard crates and a tinkling cascade of brass shells. Read the rest of this entry

Heresy Ad Infinitum – Part I

Heresy Ad Infinitum – Part I

By Tim Sweeney

‘Now,’

With but a single word did Heresy begin.

I

He crouched over the body of the Astropath like a starving predator over fresh-caught prey.  The corpse had come apart in his grip, the soul-bonded psyker as frail in death as she had been in life.

‘By all the fires of Nocturne, what did you do?’ Read the rest of this entry

Drabble: The Rictus Grin

I began this a long time ago as a sort of sequel/spin-off to my story ‘A Smile Like the Emperor’.  For whatever reason, it never stuck with me, and I abandoned it after this short opening.  As I think you learn more from your failures than you do your successes, I thought I would share it here and see what people think.

The Rictus Grin (Unfinished)

by Tim Sweeney

 

“Potential Cael, what say you, then, to a warrior’s life of violence, faithfully serving the Emperor and the Imperium until you finally embrace death?”

The three faces, so human and so utterly pathetic, peered into the soul of the beautifully ruined child before them.

The treacherous little bastard smiled up at his saviours.

“I have seen enough,” Read the rest of this entry

Pretty One

(This is a little story to practice writing combat scenes, using a couple of minor characters from some upcoming stuff I am working on.)

Pretty One

by Tim Sweeney

“Well you’re a pretty one, aren’t you?”  said Urska Junn of the Executioners Chapter, his vicious, gap-toothed grin peeking through a fanning beard of coarse black hair

The ork responded with a snarl, thick ropes of saliva hanging from lopsided tusks.  Bizarrely, it wore a uniform of a vaguely Imperial cut, white material showing through the blood and grime of the battlefield.  Both sides of the greenskin’s chest were covered in dozens of crude medals, seemingly made from battlefield detritus, each emblazoned with the symbol of an ork skull and crossed axes.

“You like axes do you, xenos?” Junn continued his taunting.  He raised his own chain-axe, gunning the motor, the jagged teeth growling with their need to rend flesh.  “I like axes too.”

Waaagh!” the Blood Axe boss roared in response.  The greenskin, even taller than the Space Marine, reared back, raising its own weapons to the sky in a  warrior’s display of strength.  It wielded a buzzing chain-axe at least as big as Junn’s own in one hand.  The other was encased in a rusted power claw, the finger-blades crackling with deadly energy.

“Impressive,” grunted Junn as he snapped his bolt pistol up, releasing a burst of explosive shells at the ork’s face.

It must have expected the move, the claw darting up to intercept the shots, the shells detonating harmlessly within the coruscating blue lightning encircling the weapon.  The ork grinned, one of the few beings alive in the galaxy with a smile more hideous than Junn’s own. Read the rest of this entry

An Interview with a Night Lord

(A little character building exercise I worked on as I seek to turn Cerck the Night Lord into a worthy antagonist for a novel or series of short stories.  This here is a straight quote, which is a little different to anything I have done before.)

 

“Ah yes, ‘honour’.  You thin-bloods rant on and on about your honour as though you invented the concept; as though none of us knew what the word meant as we slaved away creating this crumbling Imperium you serve.  But, tell me this, Brother Kruss of the Executioners Chapter of the Corpse-Emperor’s Adeptus Astartes: Have you not done distasteful things for the sake of your honour?  Have you not attacked those you thought innocent, killed those you thought did not deserve to die, simply because honour dictated you obey your orders?

Tell me, O Honourable One, did you not betray the very Imperium who names me heretic and traitor, all to honour an oath sworn to the Astral Claws by your ancestors?

What makes you so different to me, then?  Was it enthusiasm, perhaps?  Did you have to be dragged, kicking and screaming like a child, into doing that which your honour demanded?

I gladly betrayed the Imperium, as did the rest of my Legion and my Father, Konrad Curze himself. The Imperium was built upon the corpses of the Legions – our corpses – brave warriors fighting and dying for the lies of a man who would be a God.

I gladly betrayed a Grandfather who used us, who encouraged us to be the monsters he created and then discarding us as unclean when we were of no further use.

I was a murderer, you know, back on Nostramo.  I slit more throats before my tenth birthday than you have in whatever infinitesimal  period of time you have served your upstart Chapter.  I was a murderer, a rapist, a vicious, violent criminal, and yet I could not in good conscience stand by while the Emperor condemned the Night Lords for being what his Imperium needed us to be.  How could I, a noble warrior of the Legiones Astartes, swallow my pride – my honour – while my father and my brothers were so mistreated, ordered to be destroyed by the Emperor who created us?

Kill me if you must, for I have lived and fought and killed for ten thousand years; I have murdered whole worlds and I have eaten the geneseed of loyalist and traitor both.  Death holds no fear for one such as I.

You may claim my head and have vengeance on behalf of the mouldering corpse you so fervently serve,  but remember this, O Mighty Executioner: The only difference between you and I is that, when the stakes got too high, your Chapter crawled meekly back to the bosom of the Emperor you once betrayed.

We, at least, have the honour to stand by our convictions.”

-     Lonalios Cerck (aka ‘the Faceless’), Champion of the Night Lords Traitor Legion, during his interrogation by the Executioners Chapter of the Adeptus Astartes.

 

 

 

The Price of Purity

(a fun little piece I worked on briefly to help me establish a character I might use as an antagonist in a Black Library 40K pitch down the line.)

The Price of Purity

by Tim Sweeney

“I told you this would happen,” whispered Cerck as he drove his fingers through the Iron Warrior’s eyes.

He was very careful not to push too deeply, not wanting the energised talons on his fingertips to penetrate the brain and kill the enemy warrior outright. Oh no, they must pierce the eye lenses just so, and rest against the eyeballs, razored claws ever-so-gently slicing through the pupil. Vision would begin peeling away in black curtains for the instant before the gelatinous masses burst, hissing and popping in the sparking lighting field that encased the Night Lord’s gauntlets.

The Iron Warrior refused to surrender meekly, levelling a heavy punch into Cerck’s stomach even as he began to bellow in agony. Cerck took the blow easily, not bothering to dodge, his ancient armour more than a match for even the mightiest of blows.

“Now, now, a Legionary should never cry,” he laughed as the Iron Warrior’s screams intensified. Cerck took another punch to the chest, weaker this time, more frantic, ignoring it as he jabbed his thumb-talon through the mouth grill of the Iron Warrior’s helm. There was no finesse this time, just a rapid gouge that sliced the tongue down the middle. He gave a little shudder as he felt the gushing blood lap against his hand, bubbling around his claws.
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Tales from the Great Crusade

Been a while, busy with work and the novel unfortunately, so not much time for ‘fun’ writing.

Anyhoo, the writing competition I entered into a few months back (Tales from the Great Crusade) is drawing to a close, with my story due to be publicly posted in the next couple of days.  The stories themselves are being judged by Black Library author and cat hater, Aaron Dembski-Bowden, which is an absolutely HUGE honour for everyone involved.

If anyone is interested, keep an eye on that thread at the Great Crusade forums (great place, incidentally, if you are interested at all in Warhammer 40k) and wish me luck, as the winners are getting published and that would be a huge boon in my quest to become a sci-fi rock star!

Tim

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